better than 50 shades?

The following is of a very adult nature, please do not read if you are under 18 or easily offended.

The following is fiction (or is it?)

I havent read 50 shades of grey ( I have now, weeks after writing this)  but i've heard it's pretty tame, be interested to hear how the following compares:

Her scarf used to tie her wrists to the headboard, legs stretched and tied to the corners of the bed,  blindfold on and gagged.....  no idea where she will be touched or how she will be touched, she was a little scared but knew her man would keep her safe...... crack! the whip struck across her breasts, she tries to scream, the pain had taken her by surprise, the whip  struck across them again, this time hitting her nipples, the pain traveled through her entire body yet this time she didn't try to scream, she hoped for more.........the whip was brought down repeatedly on her nipples, gently at first, then crack! she devoured every second of the pain, disappearing into a world beyond her bedroom..... She had never experienced a pain like this, pain that made her feel out of control, as the whip left her skin she could still feel the stinging, she could still feel the adrenaline pumping. 

The gentle touch of a hand over her now red breasts felt amazing, she was more sensitive to his touch than normal, his hand grabbed and squeezed each breast, carefully fastening rope around each one. Squeezing them while pulling the rope tighter, she could feel her breasts getting hotter. His hand rubbed across her nipples, around in circles, then when she least expected it, he squeezed and pulled hard on her nipples, a shooting pain travelled through her body, leaving her breathless for a second.  She tried to move, he pushed her back down and slapped her across the face, telling her to be a good girl and lay still. She nodded because she was completely in his hands, a little scared of what he would do next, but at the same time loving what was happening, she could feel her breasts starting to throb but he was relentless pulling the rope tighter. 

She feels the whip again, this time gently being slid down her body, down the inside of her thighs to her feet. She tries to move again as this time it is tickling, but as punishment, the inside of her thighs are slapped by his hand. She tries to scream, so he does it again, she lays still. As the pain turns to a stinging then to a tingling he runs the whip back up her legs this time stopping and leaving the handle resting against her now moist and very sensitive clit. 

Every slight movement arouses her even more as the whip handle rubs her clit, but she isn't allowed to enjoy it yet.  He takes her gag off and makes her promise to be a good girl, she agrees. Still blindfolded she has no idea what he has planned for her she isn't sure if she can cope with anymore pain yet wants more. She is told to open her mouth, she does as she is told, she waits in anticipation, thinking she may have his cock in her mouth soon, but instead he pushes her own dildo in.  He demands that she sucks it.  The now wet dildo is taken out of her mouth and pushed gently and slowly into her pussy. She moans as she feels every inch of her toy being slid inside her. By now she really wants to be fucked but the toy is left inside her, not moving. She begs him to fuck her, but she is ignored.  There is no response, she isn't even sure if he is in the room anymore. She begs for him to touch her, to fuck her.  But nothing.

She hears a sound, so knows he is still there, he puts his hand over her mouth and whispers to her to trust him, she has no idea what he is going to do next. Her breasts are really throbbing now and even his breath feels heavy on them.  He teases her with his tongue around her nipples, but then for a second she is confused as both her nipples are now being licked, she realises that there is someone else in the room with them. He whispers again to trust him. Her senses are heightened, she feels every breath and touch as both tongues flick her nipples, fingers then squeeze them tight and then she is slapped hard across her breasts, and again, she starts to moan but is soon gagged as a large and very hard dick is pushed into her mouth. 

She isn't able to move her head as she is pinned to the bed, he pushes his dick deep into her mouth until she gags, he laughs and tells her to take it all. She is loving the feeling of being powerless and vulnerable, her body is open to be used how ever her man wants to, and now with someone else in the room, who could it be? she has no idea!  She is given a chance to get her breath back, but his dick is soon pushed back deep into her mouth, she gags again as she does she is slapped around the face, this makes her gag more. As she takes another breath her dildo is pulled out and pushed back in hard and deep, she doesnt have chance to moan as his dick is forced back into her mouth. She can feel fingers rubbing her clit, while her toy is pushed in and out, making her wetter and wetter.  He pulls it out, leaving her wanting more. She is left alone again.

The rope is untied, letting the blood pump again into her now very sore breasts. They are massaged by 4 hands, rubbing and pulling on them. The sensation nearly pushes her over the edge, but she is told not to come yet. She can't help it, and can feel her whole body tingling as her nipples are pulled and sucked, her breasts grabbed and squeezed, she knows this feeling well as her toes start to curl she knows what is about to happen...... she feels someone move so they are between her legs, as she is about to come, a thick, hard dick is forced inside her, he pushes it deep but pulls it out again, she wants to come and can not hold it in much longer. As he enters her again, her whole body orgasms, every muscle tightens, her nipples pulled up high and let go of just as she climaxes, his dick deep inside her as she screams with pleasure. 

Her arms and legs are untied, but he is still inside her, she can feel his body against her, he kisses her, she recognises the kiss, its the man she trusts, the man she loves. She relaxes a little knowing she is safe. She recognises his change of breathing and knows he is really enjoying what he is doing. His body rubs against her clit as he fucks her, she can feel another orgasm coming, she puts her arms around him and pulls him in deeper, as she starts to lose herself in the moment her hair is grabbed and her head pulled round, a smaller but still hard dick is pushed into her mouth,  she hears her man's breath change again as he comes deep inside her body, clearly aroused by seeing her sucking another man. He rests a second, but then starts to rub her clit, she orgasms again, this time is different, she can not be touched anymore, she is tingling everywhere, but he continues, she tries to squirm free, but her head is grabbed and the dick pushed deeper into her mouth, she orgasms again and her whole body tightens up. 

She is wet, she can still feel his hand near her clit, a hand on the back of her head so she can't pull away, she knows he is enjoying it because as she came again, she felt him throb.  She feels a finger being slid into her very wet pussy, then a second and a third, she doesn't think she can take much more, but he slides in a fourth, his cum lubricates his hand, he slides in his thumb, gently at first, then harder, pushing his fist inside her, stretching her wide. he opens his hand slightly while inside her, she moans loudly, he tightens his fist and slides it out. She thinks that she will be given a chance to catch her breath but no, he slides his whole hand back inside her, in and out, deeper each time, she can feel his hand pressing on every spot that makes her want to scream, as she feels another orgasm building, her clit starts to be rubbed again. His dick is taken out of her mouth and her head turned to the other side, another dick is slid in and this time he comes really quickly, she can feel the other dick against her cheek then a warm stream of come slides into her mouth as he comes as well.  She reaches climax, her clit and his fist inside her make this a powerful, explosive orgasm, so intense she isn't sure if she is going to black out, he carries on pushing his fist in until she stops screaming. He slowly pulls his hand out, leans over and kisses her, sharing the other two men's pleasure.